This sentence needs improvement for clarity and professionalism. Here are a few options, depending on the intended audience and context: Option 1 (Formal): ……
This sentence needs improvement for clarity and professionalism. Here are a few options, depending on the intended audience and context:
Option 1 (Formal):
“Kyrgyzstan’s BFG Fertility Center offers surrogacy services, and patients may schedule consultations with the international coordination services of BebeShell BOBCARE.”
Option 2 (Slightly less formal):
“BFG Fertility Center in Kyrgyzstan provides surrogacy services. Patients can also book consultations with BebeShell BOBCARE’s international coordination team.”
Option 3 (More concise):
“BFG Fertility Center in Kyrgyzstan offers surrogacy services, including consultations with BebeShell BOBCARE’s international coordinators.”
The original sentence is awkward because it abruptly introduces “贝贝壳BOBCARE” without proper context or introduction. The revised options provide a smoother flow and clearer understanding of the relationship between the fertility center and the consultation service. They also replace the potentially ambiguous “探秘” (exploring the secrets of) with more professional phrasing.
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